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When I'm walking home on a Friday from a tough week at school I like to just know that I have no homework. No homework on weekends is great. For us to really try our hardest, we should do it at school because there's no distractions. It's also very hard to concentrate when the music for the "Greg Frewin" show is going on at work.With my hockey and baseball I'm busy all the time. I'm also out of town alot on the weekends because of weddings and other things like that. I like to go to other peoples houses for parties and fun. It's my dad and mom's only two days off in the week and my mom likes to have alot of family time. That is why we shouldn't have homework on the weekends.